Tuesday, May 08, 2007

Dave's Cinquain

Following is my cinquain.

Withdraw

Now
In mind
A few memories
To accompany the passage
But we knew our parting was certain

All of the lines excluding the first are adverbials. Each line is classified below.

Withdraw - verb
now - adverb
in mind - prepositional phrase
a few memories - noun phrase
to accompany the passage - verb phrase using an infinitive
but we knew our parting was certain - dependant clause

2 Comments:

At 6:10 PM , Blogger Jewels said...

I like how your cinquain is reflective. I'm not sure if the verb in the title needs to be in the ing form or not; you might consider "withdrawing."

 
At 3:56 PM , Blogger LaceyT said...

I agree. I think the verb should be in the -ing form. Otherwise I thought it was creative!

 

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