Lydia's Cinquain
Looking
Across
Through crowds
Ten long minutes
To try to find ice cream
Because it sounded so tasty.
posted by Lydia @ 8:28 PM
2 Comments
Tuesday, May 06, 2008
Across
Through crowds
Ten long minutes
To try to find ice cream
Because it sounded so tasty.
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2 Comments:
With summer coming, I have to say that this seems like a really appropriate topic. I couldn't find anything obviously in need of revision with your cinquain. Good job!
I enjoyed it a lot! It was a refreshing change to a lot of the other cinquains I read on the other blogs. This one wasn't nearly as depressing! I couldn't find any problems with it either. Good work!
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