cinquain
Listening
Patiently
For the click
The key, locked door
To make its turn and open
So she can cut him with words
listening- -ing verb
patiently- adverb
for the click- Prep. Phrase
the key, locked door- Noun Phrase
to make its turn and open- Verb Phrase
so she can cut him with words- Clause
posted by Josh @ 11:17 PM
3 Comments
3 Comments:
I like the images in your cinquain. You might consider making the number of syllables in lines 3 and 6 longer so they have more than the line that came before.
I like your cinquain. I'd hate to be the person that it is directed at. I think that all of the parts are correct.
This cinquain is intense, but I like it. I also think you could consider adding more syllables to line 3 and 6.
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