Wednesday, May 17, 2006

Cinquain on Reflecting

ok so here's what I came up with..

Reflecting
wistfully
on the past
with you
to hold on
because you are gone

1 Comments:

At 10:35 PM , Blogger Vicki TB said...

How about "Day by day" as an adverbial noun phrase to replace "with you"? vtb

 

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