Sunday, May 21, 2006

Cinquain

Dreaming
Solely
By time's clock
All lonely night
To fix the day's dark
When sleep can heal reality

3 Comments:

At 7:58 PM , Blogger RachelP said...

I have only one word to say: AWESOME.

 
At 12:15 AM , Blogger Stephanie M. said...

Wow. Beautiful poem; I'm jealous. Keep it up Lauren!

 
At 10:32 PM , Blogger Vicki TB said...

I agree that "To fix the day's dark" is a powerful line. If caught me by surprise. Thanks. I also like Justin's line about the refrigerator. vtb

 

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