Thursday, May 08, 2008

Kyle's Cinquain

Swimming
Here
With fish
All day long
To find some clams
Because you want some pearls

2 Comments:

At 7:38 PM , Blogger Lydia said...

Looks good to me! It reminds me of Nemo!

 
At 10:08 PM , Blogger Emily said...

I couldn't find any problems with this. I really enjoyed the ending - most likely because I wasn't expecting it.

 

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